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Anonymous Wed Jun 5 22:47:59 2024 No.23459529 [View]
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A second attempt. Hopefully with more show less tell.

>>23459479
I'm not sure what this criticism is meant to convey
>>23459479
I felt the same. My focus on concision often leads to concepts not having time to breath.
>>23459480
Speaker is going to fuck a girl who wants to be fucked, but in getting fucked will be cursed to be the speaker's slave, and also obtain unimaginable power.

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