/lit/ - Literature

>Short play due tomorrow
Please help me /lit/, My brain is stuck and I cant write dialogues for my play. It has to have at least 10 dialogues. It's about Willy Loman's situation but in modern day in a different job. So here's the work I've done.

>See the man, He’s driving his car with a grin plastered on his face. Speeding across the highway in his Citron-green 1977 British Leyland Mini 1000 in the morning summer of 1999 he’s heading to his job. His belly is exposed and his hair hangs down his shoulder. He wears a ragged linen shirt and outside his car extends the noisy and busy road. He stares at the steering wheel while reminiscing about the good days that were now light years behind him. “JSNXISNDIBCWD” his motorola 8000x dynatac rang, veering him away from immersing himself deeper in another trance-like state that would surely ensue public disaster if let about. He picked the phone and it turns out to be a message from the newspaper offering subscription and he ignored it.
Willy got to the construction site. It’s only the beginning of the day yet it reeks of sweat. Giant cement tubes and hollow bricks are being carried from place to place as if lego blocks. No one greeted him and he passed on to apply his work gear. It’s break time so he and his coworkers sat in a circle atop the green grass to eat lunch...

i only wanted to know if it was a cheap shot or not because i dont like being blatantly manipulative holy shit what is wrong with you people

>tfw you have a scene that you need to happen and a pair of arcs you really like but they can't happen at the same time but that scene you need to happen depends on both of the arcs happening
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