/lit/ - Literature

>>23218308
Would you say that this passage is one of the strongest, weakest, or neither? I see what you mean after re-reading the passage right before
>Nevertheless, he has no better option.
The whole passage leading up to that is just off even by maximalist standards, and I could probably re-write it.
As for the poetry read by "Gem Yellow"(if you know the game the actual character is obvious), do you think it was appropriate or better left as part of a separate piece altogether? Perhaps a Francis pastiche would be best left for Gerson himself as his life philosophy best resembles the kind of passive observation Francis would write about.