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Hey /wg/ I have this story about a man who falls into psychosis and its religion based

I have this part where the character goes to church before it starts (You know show don't tell) and the peacher talks about the devil and how can effect you. (He thinks satan is speaking to him)

While a sign of whats to come. I feel this is just plain bad foreshadowing. is there a better way of doing this? it feels like obvious foreshadowing

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