/lit/ - Literature

>>21811016
This is my first time writing a story longer than 500 words. Ignoring my ESL word usage, how did I do in terms of character description and pacing? I was about to expand my story beyond 1k words but I want to ask whether I should quit writing or fix my style. I'm still struggling with which tense I should use. Warning: /hmofa/ content.

https://pastebin.com/05HPVFX9

So many girls like me. Literally fawning over me. And i’m such a boring, miserable misanthrope that I let all of these opportunities pass me by. It stings because if I had a different attitude about life, I would be so happy right now.

>>21031705
>It's 2022 and he's not an atheist

cope, seethe, dilate, take an iq test, commit sudoku

>>19700792
Looks like I need to start attending these, I am running out of options lads.

Books on immortality and transcending death?

>>18734960
yeh I guess fuck books I will write a book that will cover love, friendships, cringe, edge and based
full of brutal truths and cheat codes
so that no one else suffers yet so that they can make others suffer if needed
but idgaf about fucking women or inb4 men
there is no happiness to be found in there
personality comes first but knowing my type...
it might take a year iwkms

Does anyone saved the Platonism General copypasta?

>>16664331
>Large print

>be me.
>Essentially write erotica every day.
>Like really write, dumb coomer brain hammering out thousands of words a day, every day, for close to the last 14 years.
>Can type close to 90 wpm one-handed.
>Can't even get past the first page when I try to write non-smut.
Truly I am cursed.

>>16526745
>Experimental prose

Pretty disheartening to think that every person who read this book could have read something that wasn't actively destructive to their minds instead.