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Looking for some feedback. Mainly the prose. This was in a response to those flash fiction prompts where you have to use certain phrases and ideas. So while I don't care for the story I'm more interested if my writing is eligible and whether I can start to write stuff I like.
Thank you for your replies. They are truly appreciated

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