/lit/ - Literature

>>22823689
I mostly read vanilla hentai but yeah I think those will be some good things to add

>>22823704
I was actually intending for her to be an illusion mage. The control she has over him with it would be good. I think she cannot control him directly but can subtly direct him to certain paths, like a gentle nudge.

The notion of her as a last heiress is interesting, however I intended for her to groom him because both her and him are a bit on the outs- the barbarian prince is the only member of his people in the city they're at, and the lady is a bastard daughter.

I'm not sure how to write a bastard daughter inheriting things ahead of her legitimate siblings. But it also might just not be necessary.