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So this story is about two best friends making a trip to an island to gather up their buddies. This story is set up in 2070. We explore the absurdity of the world at that time, which was both tongue-in-cheek and poignant.
How am I doing?
I haven't been able to tell how good or bad my writing is for a while and I wonder what
does it really sound like.

Thank you.

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21914677

So this story is about two best friends making a trip to an island to gather up their buddies. This story is set up in 2070. We explore the absurdity of the world at that time, which was both tongue-in-cheek and poignant.
How am I doing?
I haven't been able to tell how good or bad my writing is for a while and I wonder what
does it really sound like.

Thank you.

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