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Anonymous Fri Mar 11 20:13:44 2022 No.20050792 [View]
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Can I get some crit for the first chapter of a story I'm working on, before I post it? 2.7k words. I got a three day ban for spamming 50% of the most powerful gamer word on another board, and used it to get some writing done instead of shitposting, but now it's finally expired.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b7uomNYKUftojp6BSo4G9x0reMqW4YhaH2sluccV1IE/edit?usp=sharing

I'm particularly interested in fixing any persistent mistakes I keep making.

>>20050073
Thanks, anon. If you don't want to read the entire chapter, even the first section would help.

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