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>>17501881
I like the gemological imagery a lot
>And you take these diamonds,
you throw them very high
and
>to know you are a rock with golden veins

>>17507531
I like the first stanza rhyme scheme, but second stanza scheme seems off, like the first was ABAB and the second is ABBA, could be slicker if you stuck with the same rhyme schemes in both.

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