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I've been going on with my chinaman story. Do I put more stops in kearney's speech? Would it be beneficial to throw in a few action and exposition to break up his speech, or should I just keep continuing on and let him speak?

1/2 of me thinks readers will get bored of him talking all the time
1/2 of me thinks its too important so they'll get annoyed by the breaks in the speech, and since it's a speech, it's supposed get "everyones" attention.

Thoughts?

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