/lit/ - Literature

>>20465944
>I'm trying to write an awkward date right now. The readers will cringe! The readers will squirm! The readers will never forget this trial, this tribulation!
NONSENSE. Don't believe in the doubts that riddle your noggin! Believe in yourself; pick yourself up from the negativity!

>>20374125
Thank you for the criticism on my pastebin, anon. I'll write this down somewhere.

Also, the reason why I wrote it constantly as "the ruler" and not "him" is because I wanted to push the fact that this character would probably refer to himself as that a lot. But, judging by the criticism I've received, that most likely won't work. Again, thanks.