/lit/ - Literature

Pic related is from something I've been writing for my own enjoyment at the end of everyday for the past week or so. I know it's poorly written, as I wrote it like how one eats junk food.
When writing it I would gen ai images alongside it for my own pleasure. Looking back on it afterwards made me think of adding some image decorating the sides like what monks would do in olden times.
So do the images make it more enjoyable to read? Also how should I improve this?