/lit/ - Literature

>>20222345
Thanks
>>20222407
Nope
>>20222424
Thank you I meant bonfire like a fire. I'll use lighter language and fix it
>>20222436
That makes a lot of sense, I tend to overwrite my simple scenes too much because I really respect how authors like Melville and Dostoevsky illustrate a scene seamlessly, so I try to do the same. Commas are fucked and I truly am lost on how they work in professional writing. Also the carp is just a carp on his wall, not a talking one but that does sound pretty cool :)