/lit/ - Literature

After kicking coke and painkillers, now that I can't get fucked up none of my friends hit me up anymore - only when they want a cigarette (they enthusiastically say it too, "Bro!! Let's smoke!!".
Fuck it depresses me /lit/. I've known those guys since grade school and now soon as I can't go out and get fucked up with them (it's not just going to parties, it's sitting around in a room splitting grams of coke and getting all paranoid), they never come over and see me.
I'm considering moving out of the city to Los Angeles (only a few hours away) since in my town, you know who you know and that's it. Finding new friends is near impossible.

>>5262367
"If you're so funny
Then why are you on your own tonight?
And if you're so clever
Then why are you on your own tonight?
If you're so very entertaining
Then why are you on your own tonight?
If you're so very good looking
Why do you sleep alone tonight?
I know because tonight is just like any other night
That's why you're on your own tonight
With your triumphs and your charms
While they are in each other's arms"

Hi guys,

I've been feeling really down about my writing recently. I'm studying creative writing at university and had to submit a piece that I felt was quite bad. It's made me question whether I should continue writing.

Could you let me know what you think of the above story? Is it really as bad as I think it is?

http://pastebin.com/5kaSKWgK

It's approx. 1,000 words, which was the limit I had to conform to.

Thanks.