/lit/ - Literature

>>8746515
Ah, but if only your vase was pretty!

And what use is an empty vase anyhow? It will always be waiting and wanting to be filled, only an ornament without purpose.

I'm not unwilling to appreciate your piece. It just doesn't say anything to me. I personally am of the persuasion that poetry should be meaningful, with purpose. Doesn't mean it can't be simply beautiful and expressive as that's a purpose in itself. However it strikes me that yours is neither.

Don't be discouraged or offended, its not personal. I just think perhaps you could do better. Maybe someone else will see your work differently.