/lit/ - Literature

>>22221391
>Your additions aren't very good.
Thanks for the honest feedback, I'll keep tweaking until it's good.
>Either rewrite it as a proper story and post it online as fanfiction, or don't even bother.
I will not be entertaining either option, since I've already bothered too much and for too long.
>5% longer outline is still just an outline and not a story.
And that would be fair to say, if it was just 5%. Yet if the latest texts were to be combined and properly arranged into the original tale, it would end up doubling in length.