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Anonymous Sat Mar 30 11:42:12 2024 No.23235425 [View]
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>>23234528
So I'm writing a bit more of the story, the premise is that a father and son of a longma (dragon-horse) beastman race are off to trade with humans when they get hassled by bandits.

https://pastebin.com/HhrWz6By

How is it so far? I tried to be a bit more creative with my writing.

Your transformation description is really helpful by the way, I appreciate it and I'll modify it for later descriptions.

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