/lit/ - Literature

In this thread, you post an excerpt of whatever you're working on and I critique it.

I'm not a literary expert and not exceptionally well read, so all I can give is kind of an average reader's first impression. Mostly I'll be looking at does this make me want to keep reading or not, with more comments as the piece warrants.

If you want to critique as well, go ahead. I'm doing this to solve the common problem of too many submissions, not enough critiques.

Go.