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Anonymous Sun Mar 31 08:43:48 2024 No.23238508 [View]
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So I started reading the Techniques of the Selling Writer.

I decided to try and nix run-on sentences and arrange the words in a way that made sense like it suggested.

I also changed the premise of it a bit to something a bit more creative. And I also tried to cut down on the exposition as much as I could and have it portrayed through actions and thoughts.

What do you think? You know you were right, rewriting it is really helpful.

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