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Can somebody provide me with helpful critique on my recent work. Also General critique thread
Chapter 1
“Come on do it.”
“No man I’ll get in trouble, and keep your voice down!”
“You know Karishma’s right you have no balls.”
“Wait did she actually say that?”
Raghu looked at Yash and shrugged. Yash looked at his target a Miss Urmila was hard to miss by anyone, what is it about middle-aged people that makes them so fat. Yash could feel the warmth of rubber in his hand as he stood up and saw all the students a couple of them were actually writing the rest were just chatting about and keeping their heads low. Atleast no one will be able to see me doing this he thought as he clumsily threw the rubber as if a little girl was pushing a ball, expectedly the piece of rubber didn’t go far enough and landed in somebody’s bag in the second row. ”OH man you’re so stupid!” cried Raghu, Yash was kinda happy it he didn’t hit the teacher. “Now see how it’s done.” said Raghu grinning as he tore another small piece of rubber so confident was Raghu that he stood up and pulled his arm back before he realized Miss Urmila was staring right at him. “Yes Raghu.” “Is there a problem with your arm or do you have a question?” Yash wondered where all of Raghu’s bravado went when he answered “I have a question Miss.”
“What is it?” In the shock of it all Raghu had forgotten to put his arm back down as his mind scrambled to find a question, After all to have a question he should know what the subject was. “What was that last line you wrote Ma’am?” “Sit down Raghu I’m sure you don’t have an eye sight problem.” “Yes Ma’am.” Yash had the biggest smirk on his face as Raghu sat down and thre the piece of rubber on the ground “What were Karishma’s view on your balls Raghu, Whatever it was they must have changed after this display of your balls.” Raghu did not answer but just glared at his bench mate.