/lit/ - Literature

>>14331729
>risking life for mary sue whore
>coming back like a lap dog when mary sue whore tells you off and disagrees with his plan
>allowing mary sue to even open her mouth instead of putting her in her place
>spend 7 years looking up annoying mary sue whore who will likely take his credit for saving whatever

I think you should just describe Curtis presenting her to Brad and Chad. Then have him leave the bedroom and allow the reader to imagine the rest.

>>14042578
>2019
>writing novels in first person
>writing novels
>writing

>>12733873
She had 0 (zero) reasons to like Raskolnikov, as based as he was. Much less to follow him to Siberia.

>be prostitute who has to whore herself out to care for drunken father and dying mother
>have one friend who talks to you about the bible
>creep shows up saying he knew your father after he got stomped to death by horses / commited suicide, it's not clear if he did not want to die
>creep offers to help you with the dude's burial
>creep often makes you weird and uncomfortable pleas when you two are alone, like the whole Lazarus chapter
>creep's enemy shows up and shames you in public because of a beef that he has with the creep
>creep reveals he axed to death your only friend and her innocent sister and collapses all the time
>still love the dude and follows him to Siberia when he confesses
>visit creep as much as you can only to be treated with indifference while every other prisoner loves you
>insist

Fuck, I want a woman like this.