/lit/ - Literature

>>14819163
Poured into me like melted wax—the wax invisible, the words useless—the power of your circumstances has melted your brain into glass the shape of a television. A man & a work without harmony.

>>9499625
It's a script I made.

Preposition ratio: [prepositions / total words] (10% or less is ideal, makes reading more dynamic)

Zombie Nouns = nominalization = verbs turned into nouns

Adverbs leech the verve out of verbs

Lex Diversity = different words / total words (doesn't really mean anything)

Content Carrying words = (nouns, verbs, adj)/total words

PV Div = (Words - Most Common Words) / total words

Longest Word = usually something worth getting rid of

>>8746462
Soon two word motifs will replace depth and weight as the critical determinant of good poetry. There are no longer French neighborhoods, or windless nights atop Mount Olympus, or Irish and Greek folk music in smoky all wood cafeterias. Now we get parades of introspective blah out of some schmuck lost in the tiny Möbius strip of his idea of himself.

>>7212280
>>7212290
This is rly good. Might want to keep it off /lit/. The only thing ye maymay want 2 drop are the tags on the dialogue: 'hun' , 'Louis'.

>>6988819
It be annoying—ye think/write in clichés and y'll never be any good at writing or speaking or loving or fucking until ye burn em all off and purify yr well of English and straighten out yr thought grammar. Obv there is hope for ye; fo find fime 2 red bookaz allowed to yrself it r th only wu-wei...

But 4 real it's b4d.

>>6939750
FLU is to INFLUENZA

as

U is to BUTT

:^(

I hope you take that advice and shove it Where it belonGs.

>>6873841
There was no time for a scholarly analysis, and, besides, I have always believed that you can be judged most accurately by the standards and taste of freshly sphincter clipped butt goo and in all matters regarding you no one will, like, ever care.