/lit/ - Literature

I'll review some more and retoast I suppose

>>15079921
Good dialogue, but as a preventative measure for it being too on the nose in some parts, try reading it aloud to see if you'll sense anything unnatural or forced whenever it comes out of your mouth. Not that this is how you speak or anything. Other anon was right about some of your sentences, they do make the eyes drag on a little bit and could be made shorter.
>>15078452
I keked
>>15077068
Comfy but weird. The tripping I'm doing over some of the sentences probably would rock some people to stop reading. Still, I think you're onto something, try smoothing it out just a small bit while not losing whatever style this is

Retoast but extended
https://justpaste dot it/46jp9

>>11483522
>shitty bait
only person baiting here is you, faggot

artists aren't creating art. they're just doing what they love. people create art as an identity issue with thinking how great it is to be an artist. it's bullshit.

the greatest "art"? it's life, baby. and it's a gamble everyday you participate.

What's the point of a literature degree?

>I post exclusively shit

>>7939373

>>7829029
>millions of threads on Faulkner
>millions of threads
>on Faulkner

>>7818731
What? He hasn't read my books. And you know what? He probably hasn't written even one book himself. There's always going to be people who will try and drag you down for your accomplishments and those people have nothing going for them because they're bitter. Is my series fucking "gravitys rainbow meets the sandtrout from dune"? Of course not but it's a good set of training wheels to refine my skills so that I'll improve and make something really great. I enjoy writing. It's fun. Don't like it? Don't read it.