/lit/ - Literature

To the ones who criticized our book: Thank you. Thank you very much
>https://sigilworks.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/violas-chapter-1/

We are going to be published soon and it is all thanks to you. You know who you are.

I haven't edited the one posted on our website yet though

>>9820775
We just sent a weeb shit illustrated novel for publication and I could use some criticisms about it before we get a reply from the publication house.
>https://sigilworks.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/violas-chapter-1/

This is our first time taking our hobbies seriously. Hope the world will be kind to us this time

>>9728679
My team made some weeb designed illustrated fiction.
The illustrations are still on going but the story is done and we would really be happy if you guys could leave some criticism about it.

>https://sigilworks.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/violas-chapter-1/?iframe=true&preview=true&calypso_token=0e8c63ab-dad2-4b54-a3ef-2e065c72917c

It's just some 30k words divided into 3 chapters