/lit/ - Literature

>>20033867
will buy on release

>>18541393
>the utopia paradigm shoved into economics

>>18541405
look at those excuses and extremes. going to a coffee shop doesn't suddenly turn you into another person. sounds like your more afraid of doing shit and failure than realizing you need failure in order to grow and produce. you're not going to learn human interaction by avoiding all forms of it except the ones that make you safe, comfy, and only benefit you in one specific way. stories are about growth and conflict in some form... the only thing you seem to have experience in, is stunted growth and self defeat. so maybe write about that?

Uh oh derpy post modern cigarette guy is back

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>>7921614
Thanks for the feedback!

I like how you created the personality for this character in your writing. One thing that I would modify (probably because I'm a little bit nit picky) - you write '1.96 meters, 120 kilos, sense of honor and justice, a sense of humor.' I know you only use the word twice in the sentence, but you might want to consider changing it to something of the sort like '1.96 meters, 120 kilos, a faculty for honor and justice, plus a sense of humor.' But, you're the writer, you choose your story and how to tell it.

It's quite an intriguing last sentence, too.

Well done.

>>7896410
>On the Marble Cliffs
enjoy fammy

>>6870331
>glum gum cum bun?