/lit/ - Literature

Had to do a sonnet for my lit class how'd i do?

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Your eyes, green as rolling emerald fields.
Your crimson hair, running down your shoulders.
Tis my love for you that no other wields.
You are a goddess with vibrant composure.
Your curves blind men like they stare at the sun.
Magnificent in the eyes of all men.
Beautiful you are, stunning everyone.
I come back always each time and again.
Love of my life, my angelic lotus.
I would move heaven and earth through and through.
God’s radiant girl, his magnum opus.
I give my undying love now to you.
Elegant lady, let me set you free.
Come my love, so we can together be.