/lit/ - Literature

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honestly, I was going to get the MC to meet a Seer (or druid) after he kills the lord by the end of the first (or second) chapter, to talk about the whole thing. You are right about me writing it as if it's a movie camera, which is the only way i can comfortably write in because English isn't my native language. there is many talk of hair color (and skin color in the future) because the actual plot is a conquered group (forest people) of people rebelling against the conqueror(horse riders) so distinguishing them from hair and skin color, along with pointy ears is important because the ethnic groups would never be explicitly named. They will only be known as different from their names, skin and hair color, what they wear and their interpretation of deities. The story will get into how those horse riders managed to conquer a forest, something they can't do normally without losing the advantage of horses. thanks a lot for reading it though I appreciate it and will give more thought to the introductory part of the novel. I will transcript the next part where they talk in the keep, which would explain the setting more and post it here.