/lit/ - Literature

>>14430950
Klossy feet are superior because Klossy is a superior athlette, fyi

>>14228762
Her feet haven't aged a day.

How do you decide on a punishment system that will go on to define much of your works feel? I don't want to be sadistic but to be competitive in this genre, I can't have any overseers be chumps or busters because it'd be like putting oranges on a pizza. But I'm struggling with originality. I feel so constrained by the genre and cannot hazard a clever punitive system to move this project anywhere.
At this point I'd happily use any other anon's ideas because I've so little to go on my own.

>>13425804
What would be more rewarding for the reader?
>To learn the voice and perspective of the zealot that succeeds in such organizations
>The pleasures and joys of the profession
>The personalities of this secretive world, especially foreigners
>When the high speed life catches up with you (medical, organizational, personal, spiritual)
I'm trying to say something original in this genre and wonder if anyone would share what they wish they'd see written about more? My memoirs end up getting lost in the left of boom moments of suspense, where pauses in calculation and maneuver stand out to me. I try to describe some of the "fighting" although in many cases, well resourced, planned and executed action tends towards the anticlimactic. I worry about how I represent war as impacting the fate of my eternal soul and so I don't want to glorify evil. But I wonder what else should be delved into for this genre to live up to it's potential. What do you think?

>>11778236

>Goto Femininization School
>Head mistress says to start with her feets

>>11776294

Megan Boyle's pheromones must drench her axilla. I met a wiff or two of her heady pit musk and you'll hallucinate into a feminine fractal star field where vinegar perspiration and corn chip feet and raw pork pussy and toffee nut and chocolate scented braaps and salty quifs (tiny polite queefs that take great vaginal dexterity to produce.)