/lit/ - Literature

hello my /lit/ friends,
I enjoy writing poems however I get extreme nausea trying to get them close-to-perfect, to the point where I'm not sure if it's fun anymore.

This is close to what I can conclude. I realise that when I enjoy reading poetry, my favourite poems are humourous in some candid way and that is ineffable.
Yet I'm a depressed lunatic with no real friends, how am I meant to re-create the feeling I wish.
I just want to make people smile and my downfall is that I've forgotten in some ways, what the joy there is to impart.
>pic related, just took a big sip

>>19595334
I read up to the part where Icarus tells the kid not to eat the bark
I can tell you were going for an Alice in Wonderland vibe, but it’s not giving me anything new so far. You should put in a hook earlier in the story to get me interested

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>>18331583
0/10 total cringe

>>18293587
Kek

>>16536643
>his ideology