/lit/ - Literature

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Anons this is not a total list of everything written, it's a list of what is actually bought and read.

But I'm sure you're precious lit-fic (whatever that even means) will be different! The troons and few thousand odd liberal graduate students/professors that compose the entirety of your potential reader base will be so blown away by your vivid description of incel emotions they will buy several copies and blast you into spot #1.

Do you feel it is jarring to vary how dialoge is broken out at the end of a description? Specifially using comma vs colon for example this appears in a piece together.

>Bob smelled the flowers and laughed, "these smell amazing."
>Susan's brow furrowed. He was a fool she thought, but a beautiful one so very like the flower he smelled: "Enough of that, let's get back to work."