/lit/ - Literature

>>21577020
that's pretty good anon, i felt like i was experiencing the scene rather than just reading a script
i'm this anon btw >>21576925
not sure if i'm supposed to back up what i say with work, i guess this kind of works like /ic/?

>Small snippet of a VN I'm trying to work on: It's called "Self-Insert as a Loli in a Doujin Hentai" though that title is a WIP

“Though ‘gave’ would certainly be considered a euphemism if he had any say in the matter.”
>SOUND OF FOOTSTEPS
>PICTURE OF FUTURISTIC CLOCK TOWER with TEMP AND 3390 as CURRENT YEAR
“The enormous tower in the middle of the town, visible from even beyond the city, displays the current temperature: 33 degrees.”
“I clench my fists and let out a puff of air, a light vapor escapes my lips.”
>CHEERING GOING ON IN THE BACKGROUND
>PICTURE OF DRAG QUEEN DANCE
“I arrive at the center of town, where public displays of sexual depravity routinely occur at night and look towards the crowd surrounding a large stage.”
“A small boy, about eleven or twelve years old is on the stage dressed in strange garments and nearly naked in front of all the men surrounding him.”
“The young boy dances provocatively for the old men who are publicly masturbating without shame, some even letting out exaggerated groans.”
“I cringe and decide to step up my pacing as this isn’t the place a young girl would want to be caught in at night and I was about to find out why.”
u “Hey, baby. Don’t go.”
“I hear a man’s voice behind me, raspy and phlegmy.”
>BLACK OLD MAN SICKLY LOOKING
“I turn my head and notice a dark-skinned, sickly looking man approaching me. The way he was walking convinced me that I could easily out run him.”
>WHITE OLD MAN ON A CANE
“As he was walking towards me, another man approached in front of me. He was a very old and likely to stumble into a grave before he could reach me.”