/lit/ - Literature

the biggest blackpill is to stop using scifi terms on everything you fucking retarded midwit loser.
do you have a slight bit of self awareness and consciousness to realize how retarded and naive you sound when you call your shitty navel gazing fatalist view of the world the objective dark truth no one wants to hear?

>your text was too long and your writing is too complicated and hard to understand. you are supposed to write as if you are explaining to your old grandmother and your explanation should follow a clear linear path including only the relevant information
>you oversimplified many key points and you didn't include many other important parts
what the fuck do they want? i thought this shit would stop after high school.