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OC

It's not very good, but please tell me if you like it.

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Maybe make it a little bit ambiguous as to weather or not he's a nazi for the first couple thousand words, just make him likable before people realize then pull a twist on them. You could even disguise the whole setting for the first chapter or so then disclose everything at once at end of the chapter. If the message you're going for it somewhere along the lines of
>things are actually pretty good even though the Nazis won
then the first chapter could be quite easily written in a generic setting, with subtle hints before the reveal.

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