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Usually?
>area description, light nod to game areas if you're feeling sassy and also give a shit
>if Sonic's moving, describe how the movement impacts the environment either from the perspective of viewing that environment or from the third person perspective of someone nearby, aka alot of 'force of nature' esc descriptions
>character dialouge, not similar to recent games, but as close to what I envision as the perfect canon as possible. Sonic's a mindful asshole, but still an Asshole. Tails isn't a babyshit anymore. Knuckles wouldn't hesitate to punch Sonic for fun ect
>plot events that are structured the same as your standard adventure novel
>VERY simple subplots if at all
>medium to high stakes events, only one truly high stakes event allowed, no bullshit edge is allowed on my property
>going to write Robotnick as a desperate genuis just yearning for something to bite his mind teeth on
so yeah I rely on area descriptions for it to be worth a damn. example (shitty green I wrote a day ago)

>the local chao garden had gotten bigger as of late. Ever since Eggman's defeat, without much of a natural barrier the Chao had more or less floated into an era of thriving, eggs popping up left and right.
>Tails would find them in trees, bushes, his home. Had it not been for their relative self-sufficiency and how cute they were, this would have quickly became a problem.
>He had nothing to do between cooldowns of metal for new parts, so he began to document their behavior. Chao that maintained their rich, blue and yellow color often stayed in the main garden, living out their untouched lives of peace without much influence, save for the occasional non-ripe fruit.
>Sonic could be spotted stepping in periodically. Changing the fruits. Changing the channels. Creating a stockpile of non-worry for a race of little beings that seemed absolutely immune to even the idea of a worry.
>Tails would have insisted that Sonic stop interfering as to not change the Chao's color. If he brought in so much as a dusty wind in when he ran to the garden, the Chao would take to it like a new attraction. Then Tails would notice a few had a darker, dustier tint.
>Chao were truly products of their own environment. Sonic's naps proved to bring the grand majority of them into a bluer, more leisurely slumber.

It's practice so the trick is that I don't care if it ends up being dogshit. Better for the fanfiction to get the short end of my pixie stick than for my projects.

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