/lit/ - Literature

My journey through erotica/harem stories continues, I think I've read like 20 books already. Getting closer and closer to creating a recommendation chart. Mana Maste, despite being popular, turned out to be a let-down. Cliche as fuck, nonsensical world-building, instantenous relationships (not to mention abrupt), uninspired sex scenes, extremely derivative...It's not just unoriginal, it's not even average in quality, it's just not worth reading.

I'm kind of shocked, because I chose this one thanks to the author's other book 'Saving Supervillains,' which despite its flaws was one of the better harem books in the genre. It seems 2 years of writing really make a difference in writing, huh. SV was flawed is similar ways, though, the world was extremely derivative from Worm, so people who are familiar with that story will be somewhat dissapointed. At this point I'm just clicking 'next' on pages to see all the sex scenes, not much to see here anyway.

3.5/10