/lit/ - Literature

>>3232924

It's really frightening to see I live in a world that discusses this.

Indentation is the most simple and subtle way to separate paragraphs. Separating them with lines is a pattern that got popular with computers screens.

Online, it's best for your blog to skip lines, but on paper there is no reason not to use indentations.

>>I get this guy every time I post a poem on /lit/

It's called PARODY. You're supposed to find it flattering.

Try reading "Crow" by Ted Hughes, and then "Budgie" by Wendy Cope.

Or "Burnt Norton" by TS Eliot, and then "Chard Whitlow" by Henry Reed.

I don't dislike your work, honestly. But every poet has a style, and it's always worth taking back and looking at that style through the lens of parody.

I notice they deal with similar themes. Is Icarly a remake of IClaudius?

>>905107
Thx a lot
>>905120
Ty
>>905124
Exactly the kind of thing I'm afraid of and want to avoid, thx for pointing it out.
Sadly I have no native English friends and the best English chats I have are on 4chan, maybe someone knows a place on the Internet that's notorious for nitpicking on language, it'd be helpful.

Also since I'm not at all familiar with writing in English, in Dutch we have 'het groene boekje' which is the official reference on grammar, is there anything similar in English?

thanks for the help I've already gotten

Some people measure themselves by other things than mansions and villa's, and are quite happy with their <100k/year salary

>>731418
>I have an internet
>an internet