/lit/ - Literature

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>After a routine monster hunt goes awry, Adah undertakes a mission to seek out her team's disappearance. With each clue in her possession, Adah comes closer to finding the whereabouts of her comrades but becomes entangled in a web of mysteries where she confronts men transforming into beasts, old friends becoming new enemies, and a mysterious merchant seemingly in control of it all.

>Step by step, riddle after riddle, the puzzle pieces come together. As the threads unravel, Adah uncovers a greater conspiracy threatening the world she swore to protect.


https://litter.catbox.moe/yn90x6.pdf

If you want to beta read, crab, shit, praise, call me a shill, or even tell me to off myself and my book. Here's your opportunity!

https://litter.catbox.moe/0ay10a.pdf

Want to beta read my webnovel?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/67568/a-knight-of-valora-serenity

You can read my shitty novel.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/67568/a-knight-of-valora-serenity

Anon this story turned very interesting. The story is done isn't it? Nothing feels like it's written on the fly. Clearly edited. Adah is an interesting character. That said, this isn't going to succeed on Royal road. It's far too different from the progression, litrpg stuff there. Your first chapter could probably be changed to be more engaging but it works

How do I make it less shit.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/67568/a-knight-of-valora-serenity