/lit/ - Literature

>>15868696
this reads pleasantly well, maybe needs some formatting though
>>15867323
I think it's fine as long as the princess part is an actual story and not just a world building device. Like, something must be happning to her/ she must be doing something and then your protagonists enters the picture and we just shift perspective.

Here's something, I haven't been writing for a while:


To grab a flimsy wrist,
and break it in a motion:
a dance of pain and love,
we exchanged a primal glare.
The faces of two lovers,
the note of an expression
and smiles would flourish, followed by a jab to the underside of the jaw.
Stomping on a thin waist, the moans I hold so dear
would colour
with ambiguity
and poke me with an hint of fear.