/lit/ - Literature

>>22265379
I appreciate your help to improve my writing since im a noob.
I found this:
Proper haiku poetry has three elements: a reference to nature (kigo), two juxtaposed images, and a kireji, or “cutting word” which marks a transition in the verse and pulls the poem together. An individual image occupies lines 1 and 2, with the third line containing the kireji.


I simpy disagree with the need for a "Kigo". I think human life is part of nature, the most relevant part in fact.
And my Haiku has a "kireji": the "it never began" phrase has a very powerful undertone in the blackpill community, youre probably not familiar with that community so you dont realize how powerful that phrase is.

Also, I created something more powerful than a haiku: I created a haiku that has a powerful Kireji but also actually rhymes within and between phrases while still making coherent sense, which is extremely difficult to do with a haiku.

On theme:

Any books for managing drug use and general hedonia (Sex, food, media, etc.)?
How to responsibly use and consume while still maintaining a healthy balance?

>>17589988
Based always kinda had a soft spot for the religion and culture but that sounds based af. Ive got blonde hair and blue eyes tho so I've always kept the powerlevel hidden, do you think this will be an issue?

>>11318317
>>11319184
Shit. NEET for two years broke me. Not even one year as a wagecuck sealed the deal, this is depressing.

45k into my first manuscript. Some anon told me at 10k to keep going. Another anon told me to keep at it when I hit 30k.

This one thread is genuinely more supportive than anyone I know

It's a fact that most people's attention span these days have gone down the shitter. For some people its impossible to read books because they will inevitably get distracted by phone/video games/internet bullshit that has instant gratification. How does one combat this? I'm not quite as bad as people who won't even pick up books, but I can only read like a chapter a day and then I have to stop no matter how interesting the book.

Sorry to intrude /lit/ I don't frequent this board so this is my first post, my question is do you guys know of a word for when someone writes a paragraph when a sentence is needed ?

ITT: People who can't distinguish between a thought experiment and a world-view.

Yeats poems are great but make me sad. The Wild Swans of Coole brings up a lot of feels

>>6882928
>>Which novel gave you your most dirty and shameful boner?
Black Company, when the company come across Darling being raped by Limper's soldiers

I wanted to kill myself tbh I was disgusted.

>reading on bus
>some guy sits down seat next to me
>still reading
>suddenly he leans over
>whispers "Good taste"
>"O-oh, t-thanks, hehe...", I jerk out
>he says something, probably pertaining to the author or book, but I can no longer hear him
>I'm deaf
>my face is red
>sullenly wish I could get up, open the doors, and let the bus run me over
>but to do that I'd have to ask him to move
>he's now staring at me
>I say "oh, cool, yeah"
>look down at book again
>pretend to read, but actually planning my sudoku
>do this the next half hour until he gets off
>the seat is a wet puddle beneath me
Yeah, I like showing off my smarts.

Como poderia, logo eu, chorar por coisas tão pequenas, sabendo que neste mundo há alguém em martírio mais profundo que o meu?
E, mesmo assim, isso alivia a minha dor? Ou ao menos serve de conforto para a minha pobre alma?
Estas coisas não são, de maneira alguma, pequenas. São pequeninas grandezas que preenchem todo espaço cujo à felicidade é reservado na alma. Bendito és tu, oh Deus, que me presenteias com essa alma tão vasta!
Maldito é o mundo.
Mais maldito seja eu, por me permitir todo este sofrimento...

Completamente escuro, frio e úmido; a relva se curva ao mais leve vento e o barulho da chuva abafa qualquer outro som que gostaria de ser ouvido.

Lá fora? Não ligo, deve estar tudo igual.

>>6050076
Yeah.. :(

>>6038926
i wrote for 6h after discovering that i was in fact a cuck

never clicked that word doc again