/lit/ - Literature

Changed my game concept but im still struggling

How does one become good at dialogue?
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Oh, I'm not posting anything else.
But how can I greatly improve in dialogue and descriptions?
I'm just completely locked down

>>20932023
Yes I'm trying to ape someone without really understanding them. I just can't place my visuals right.
It's not working, wanting to replicate a visual style and translate to another styel in writing. I am confused.

How can I write like you? It's either that or unloading a nice beautiful .45 in my brain.

Also you know, flowers were used to mask certain smells back then

How long will it take me to be a good writer? Get a good game story going on?
I have a very solid theme but I am lost.

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I don't have anything ready to show yet.
I need to study writing like the literature and movies I like first.

Ok I'll study for real, if I want my dialogue based game to be good. What should I do?
I've got the premise, elevator pitch.

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No one would read my game like that.
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How long will it take?

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You can't write schizophrenic meltdowns, I can, because I've lived them.