/lit/ - Literature

>>22878169
Maybe I'm judging it too early because it isn't technically finished, but it's entirely aimless. The plot is entirely nonsensical, cycling from scene to scene and concept to concept with no cohesion or feeling of natural progression. The state of the characters never changes, with the relationship and depth between them going no further than the man getting manipulated and the woman being manipulative. Outside of that, it's still nothing but misery porn. There is not a single character who is given any more depth than being a cookie cutter "bad person" or a relatively innocent person who has no other development besides occasionally doing something to hurt the main characters. The dialogue is atrocious too. I have no idea why this game has caused any amount of conflict, both from people who like it and people who hate it. It's just so boring and unremarkable.

How much of a writer’s fetish should be allowed into his works?

There’s romance and erotica, yes, but can it be snuck into other genres? How much can be sprinkled and which kinds?

Have you ever tried to work your fetish into a story you’ve written?