/lit/ - Literature

>>10032498
You know most creative writing teachers are published authors, right? The same way that most acting teachers are professional actors?

hey /lit/ critique my writing

Year of the Depend Adult Undergarment
I am sitting in a room with 3 deans and there is jagged dust and lint dancing in the sunlight. my name is harry costanza. im 18.

Oh no bitch, it's Jimmy J
Straight outta motherfuckin Dublin Bay
Here reppin Paris and Trieste and Zurich
Scorched earth shit, my flow's sulfuric

Introibo ad altare dei
Approach my altar of fuckin crazy
I'm mad bitch, call the Finnegans 'wake
There'll be wailing and tears when we pound your fuckin face

Wanna fight me bitch I'm dublin down
You wanna talk shit? I wear the fuckin crown
I fuck in evening gowns
and like a fuckin hound
sniff the Brown
yeah that's a proper noun
it's like the bathroom is my fuckin breeding ground
what