/lit/ - Literature

I made some poetry, and it goes like this:

When life gets hard, and life gets tough
no pleasure is ever enough
for when we die, and die we will,
our pleasures all amount to nil.
Pity.

Any thoughts?

Know what? Lol bye. Not even going to try to communicate with you racist black-phobes over this Hermione thing. Most inferior pieces of trash to ever exist. No reason you people should be on this planet other than leeching air from people that could actually productively use it. The OP had to be a shithead and post hateful stuff because he got overly butthurt because of the punishment on 4chan, and lol that's just too bad. Then he had to summon his fleet of butt buddies to the rescue and just say more hateful things to me because their piece of shit friend said so. You can all carry on with your pathetic excuse for existence and stop replying and looking like assholes, and all agreeing with each other because you all have the same garbage mindset. Calling people "nigger" and "scum of the earth" when really, you are way more of the sort. Never tried to communicate with more toxic pieces of shit in my life, that can't comprehend anything that doesn't contain the word "nigger" because that's the extent of their vocabularies. Hope you all die. :3 Have a shitty life. I'm disgusted to know that people of such low-life contemptuous entities of life are floating around this universe. Nothing but trash hiding behind an LCD screen. Goodbye. I'm not going to reply anymore, I'm done trying to communicate with fucking shitty-ass faggy scumbags. I don't give two shits what you call me, I'm done talking to you pieces of shit. You have no fucking purpose in this life other than being the biggest generator of scumbaggery and toxicity in the world. I'm done replying, call me whatever the fuck you want. Feel great about your shitty life, I'll have a great time living mine. Yeah, I'm also shithead-phobic. Get the fuck out of this universe. I don't give a shit about what I say to you, you're fucking garbage. Go kill yourself. Lol, fucking bite me bro. You're a shithead when you do nothing but be a pessimistic asshole trying to coerce people out of happiness. That's called being a piece of shit. So fucking unecessary, no reason to go out of your way to be a dick. Just fucking fall in a meat grinder so you can't type on the internet again. You're such a fucking piece of shit, dude. Like holy balls. And yes, it's mimicking. Glad your comprehension skills are still up your ass, take them out and you might be less butthurt. Every single comment you've posted is a prime example of
abusive behavior, don't even try to bullshit with anyone with that kind of a mouth.
I'm not sure what portion of the amazon fucking jungle you were raised in, but
watch your fucking mouth before you play the "Passive -Aggressive game." You fucked up.

>>7039782
I'm 31 and anime is beautiful. Suck my dick, faggot.

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>>7034954
>"failed" situations like these up too many times
>now just hate women for putting me in this situation and expecting me to "entertain them"
>want to punch any bitch who tries to flirt with me

Fuck off, hoe. I'm not your dancing monkey. Buy a vibrator.