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Anonymous Tue Oct 16 14:37:59 2018 No.11942751 [View]
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>>11942656
Man, this is the type of shit that we (young men) get made fun of for. Let's check for the usual cliches:
>alcohol
>cigarettes
>women
All in a single verse! I like the comparison of the sunset to a candle being blown out but you really need to cut out that edgy stereotypical city-boy shit. Also salt wouldn't sting on a scar because a scar is not an open wound. All in all, it could be much worse.

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