/lit/ - Literature

>>23040537
ye ye this macro writing thing is what I struggle with, especially giving motivations to the characters to do stuff, they often end up being just vehicles for the reader to experience the world the comic is set in, literally stumbling into the plot
>>23040556
picrel? I thought it was a book about composition and not writing itself
>>23040603
noted I'll read that thank you

btw if anyone cares here's a comic I've made a couple of months for a challenge thing on a site I browse, real simple, real jank and rushed as hell (read left to right top to bottom like any other westerner comics)
page 1: https://files.catbox.moe/xfqw3k.png
page 2: https://files.catbox.moe/bjz7gc.png