/lit/ - Literature

>>10080008
I don't know what Media Res is.
This is a cut out segment from the middle of a chapter that I feels might show the most inconsistent portions of my work.

I'm taking your word for it on the grammar mistakes as it's late, but please do elaborate if you feel it helpful. I'll decide what I like as my own personal style and what to fix.

As for yours: You are better with imagery than I could imagine becoming. The descriptions are rather well done, and the explanations and tension so far is interesting. The character is relateable so far as an outsider and the entire piece has a pseudo-nihilist feel.

There are grammar/tense mistakes here too, mostly in line 5. But it's good nonetheless, seems like it's leading to something with themes of insanity.

This thread needs Christ Chan

>>8801866
>Can you hate women and minorities and still be a good believer?
Leftypol pls, no Christian nor /pol/ack would ever say such a thing.