/lit/ - Literature

>>14255288

>>14186314

>>13225986

Snitches slain by the trap
Blap blap blap
Roasties beef out their flaps
Brapp braap braap

>>13123887
Tabbing and scrolling through macro spreadsheets
Us wagies work hard for AOC's feet
One of her toes, for the senses a feast
Her fans click cash by keyboards very greased
Alexandria ascendant, on their quest
Fueled by craved femdom, taboos unaddressed
Soaking her peds in citrus, soft and dainty
Her heels emit orange and lime, faintly
Even Heaven favors her feet by a thread
AOC's tootsies reek with dank street cred
Leading to Interns and pages to boast
Spied in her gym shoe locker, Seth Rich's ghost
Mouthfuls of socks, a mask of her Asics
Seth's ghost lurked in that sweaty oasis
Living on AOCs feet puff by puff
Heavesent there to balance an end so rough
Her sole's odors linger long, like fromage
Hence her Bikram nickname, a "Cheesey" homage
Titsguys, Assmen oughta get the drone
Footsexuals tug their fastest while prone
AOC's feet forge dark shops and stores
Vending her shavings, sebum from pores
A dash of her dried skin into my latte
Brews her flavors strong with nary decay
Daydreaming all throughout brunch
About AOCs milky tea soles' scrunch
Her tootsies so hot, she's never to gloat
Often overhead to fight 'Rican bloat
Her yoga feet flex with supple finesse
AOC dons her Chuiquita Headdress
Along with her LGBT serape
Footsexuals sing podal agape
Enduring all abuse, every henpeck
Even cock mileage measured by Parsec
Dutifully reminded without pain
The universe dispenses such scarce gain
Beads perspired form on her toe's tips
Our mouths open wide to catch errant drips

Preferably read by a Caucasian as if addressing a roomful of professionally attired Latinas.

>>13015625

Write about what you love

>>12972712

>>12950331
I would remove the exposition and details from the action or find a way to strip only what is needed, barely. The action might flow differently and maybe you'd like it more.

>>12951569
Nice intonation-deliverable type text, this seemed cathartic to write

>>12952577
>corporeal
this language throws off the comparatively playful "ice age" and "frozen coffin" lines. I was picturing a Duke Nukem type gruffness but corporeal doesnt jive with that.

>>12961526
this seems like a notepad with ideas that could be expanded upon

>>12962946
someone making the student experience interesting will be a showcase of great literary mastery. this is a tough time to describe, perhaps because so many have our own reference points. I still like it, however because its trying to capture that moment that we'd otherwise dismiss and forget as a youthful apparition.

>>12965432
speaking from experience as a BTDT baddie, your post sin report to self is usually a more serene affair, almost like settling into the evil, like you learn to tread in your newly more horrible life youre still worseningly stuck with - oh, I thought it was the whiskey of someone you'd just slain. I like it for the introspection, it feels real but not quite sorrowful and depressive enough. There is not enough sadness. You are holding something back.