/lit/ - Literature

>>19841034
/jp/ here, this is form my Touhou dojinshi. It's form Reimu chan's pow.
please bully me!

"Alright, I'll bring them all to you'r-" Aunn stops mid sentence and glares somewhere behind me. I turn around and see a dumb polka dot hat in the bushes. I already know who's wearing it so I throw a yin-yan orb at her.
"WHAT THE FUCK!" Clownpiece yalls "WHATS THE BIG IDEA THROWING SHIT AT ME?!" She's wearing her usual garish red, white and blue dress and maching leggings.
"What are you doing Clownpiece?" I say as I approach her. She is a literal fiery form Hell so I know she is always up to no good. I first met her on the moon and she was a headache to deal with and the worst part was she flowed me home and now lives under my shrine.
"NOT A GOOD DAME THING!" she says louder then necessary. I know she's lying. She loves ruining whatever gatherings and festivals I host.
"Rally?" I ask her as I take out my Exorcism Rod "you're not going to wait for people to gather and run in meddle of a crowd, flash your torch and watch everyone fight?" That's what she did at my last flower viewing. Marisa and I spent most of the day braking up drunken fights wile she sat on my roof eating snacks.
"I- I'm an American!" Clownpiece says "That means I have rights wich means I have freedom and can do what ever the FUCK I want!" Clownpice folds her arms in front of her chest and gives me a defiant look as if belonging to some made up "Hell on Earth" means something. I think she's confused with a clan form Europe that left their flag on the moon. I've been to moon twice and haven't seen it so she may have made that up too.
I grab her by the caller of her dress and glare down at her eye to eye and tell her "whatever you where planing, don't."
"This Is Shrine Maiden Brutality!" Clownpiece says as she struggles to get me to let go of her "1776 will happen again if you-" she stops mid sentence and looks up at something. I look up and find nothing but before I can look away, I see her torch.

It's such a beautiful day, what I'm I doing wasting it arguing with a fiery? Actually, who was I talking to? Must have been my imagination. I sit back down next to my beloved Donation Box and look up at the clouds. I'm so jealous of clouds, thay can flout across the sky all day and no one asks them to do anything. I wish I was A cloud. Maybe if I meditate hard enough I'll become a cloud goddess and people will come to worship me. Then someone else can be MY shrine maiden. That's a great idea. First I need to make sure no one disturbs me.

>>18470046
>Any progress
Very slow. I was never taught how to spell correctly in (American public) school. It improved a little after I stoped using speech to text and found Emacs but I have to spend a lot of time correcting and confirming spelling. It's very time consuming so I often have a problem with omitting to much information in my writing.
>>18482158
>nightmare sequence where it's just a giant sea of corpses.
MGS3 did it, but it was a river and the player/Snake walks upstream past the ghosts of anyone the player killed up to that point. The ghosts had special animations and dialog depending on how thay where killed.
I miss things like this in modern videa.

>>16558413
>Also, what are some well-written existing female characters in fantasy stories that I can take inspiration from?
If you're not researching history and religion/myth you should.
Otherwise I recommend Touhou. All the characters are cute girls but are very different form each other.

>>16565521
>don't write a man with tits.
I want to write that someday. There's a lot I could do with that idea deepening on how or why a woman is "a man with tits."
>Industrialized society where the bulk of the workforce occupies job that can be done by both men and women, a safe society, and big cities.
Magic can add to this depending on how wide spared it is and how it works. Fighting isn't the only thing your characters can (or should) do in your story.

>>14866133
Writing a Touhou fan book is proving more difficult then I expected. Reimu is a poetically difficult because her personalty is so different between official print works. It's hard for me to give her the right balance between sympathy and apathy.

>>14867666
>short and curvy
I didn't think that body was passable for a 3d girl.