/lit/ - Literature

>>10989236
I tried expanding it a bit. By far the last verse was the hardest to write and I have a feeling the meta commentary doesn't really add anything.
>I want my feet running with the train track
>With shining sweat drops dropping down my back
>For the good village girls in dresses
>To be caught undressing at the sight
>Of a restless boy with big muscles

>I know that it is shallow
>But if just for a hallow
>image or hell- even two
>Inbetween the flicker
>Of your slippery finger
>-on your Instagram feed, let me be
>The boy of the hair of
>Glowing summer time wheat-...

>Oh okay, I get it, I've gone on
>Long enough now- you get it too
>Behind these loans called
>Poems, you can see clearly
>That under the skin I wish
>Was not mine, bones are breaking
>Trembling, and also shaking
>What can I say
>The inside is just as weak
>I don't let my appearances deceive